天津市滨海新区2020-2021年三年中考一模英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达

　天津市滨海新区 2019-2021 年三年中考一模英语试卷分类汇编 书面表达 2021 年天津市滨海新区九年级学业质量调查（一模）英语试卷 九、书面表达( 本题共

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　86. “一粥一饭当思来之不易, 半丝半缕恒念物力维艰”, 勤俭节约是中华民族的优良传统, 即 使我们现在的生活条件有了极大的提高, 我们也不应该浪费粮食。假如你是李华, 你所在的 学校英语校报专栏向全体学生征稿, 主题是“节约粮食”。请你根据以下提示, 写一篇应征稿。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

　（1）食物提供给我们每日所需能量, 美食使人心情愉悦。

　（2）浪费粮食的现象随处可见, 如家庭、校园食堂、餐馆等。

　（3）为了避免浪费, 我们应该在餐馆就餐时点菜适量, 若有剩余打包带回家。

　（4）号召身边的人加入光盘行动, 你建议…

　参考词汇：光盘行动 clear up your plate

　大吃大喝 overeating and overdrinking

　浪费粮食 food waste

　剩饭剩菜 leftover(s)

　要求：

　（1）词数：80～100 个；

　（2）开头已给出, 不计入总词数；

　（3）要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。

　Food is something we need every day. No one can live without food.

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　答案：

　86. Food is something we need every day. No one can live without food. Food can provide us

　with necessary energy. It can even light up our day. For example, delicious food can make people

　who are sad feel happy again.

　However, food waste is still found in family, in school dining hall and in restaurants. We should develop good habits to avoid wasting food. When you order food at a restaurant, don’t order too much and control overeating and overdrinking as well. Remember to finish your food. If you

　can’t finish all of it, you should take home what is left (leftovers).

　We can tell the people around us to join clear up your plate. We can also make posters to call

　on others to save food. Everyone can help to prevent food waste.

　 2020 年天津市滨海新区中考一模英语试题 九、书面表达 86.今年的寒假非同以往，一场新型冠状病毒肆虐而来，疫情致使学校推迟开学。居家隔离期间你做了些什么，有什么感想？请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。

　（1）疫情爆发, 待在家里，抵抗病毒；

　（2）隔离期间，做一些有意思的事；

　 （3）像其他人选择读书、并学到很多新事物；

　（4）练习书法的机会，以前喜欢但没时间练；

　（5）尝试做饭，和妈妈一起做很多美食；

　 （6）你的感想…… 参考词汇：疫情 epidemic 爆发 break out 冠状病毒 coronavirus 隔离 isolation 书法 calligraphy 要求：

　（1）词数：80～100 个。

　（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

　The 2020 winter holiday was different for most people. At the beginning of the holiday,________________________________________________________________________

　__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】[例文] The 2020 winter holiday was different for most people. At the beginning of the holiday, an epidemic broke out and made many people sick in China. We had to stay indoors to fight against the coronavirus. During the isolation period, I decided to come up with something interesting to do. I chose to read books at home, just like many other people. I learned lots of new things from reading. It is also a chance for me to practice calligraphy. I like it very much but didn’t have much time to practice it before. So I spent an hour practicing it every afternoon. In addition, I tried cooking. I made a lot of delicious food with my mother. Such as chicken wings, fried chips and cakes. It was great fun. From this epidemic, I’ve learned that we should respect nature and be more responsible. 【解析】

　【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点，写一篇关于疫情期间居家隔离的文章，人称用第一人称，叙述过去的事应用一般过去时态。

　2.例文点评：例文分三段，第一段引出本文主题，即疫情的爆发让人们不得不居家隔离；第二段则详细描述了隔离期间“我”在家做的一些平时想做却没时间做的事；第三段则讲述了从疫情爆发这件事中学会的道理。例文结构完整、层次分明，文章内容表达清晰明了，是一篇优秀的范文。

　3.高分亮点：

　短语：break out，have to，fight against，come up with，lots of，in addition，such as。

　句型：

　（1）It is also a chance for me to practice calligraphy.（it 作形式主语）

　（2）From this epidemic, I’ve learned that we should respect nature and be more responsible.（宾语从句）

　2019 年天津市滨海新区中考一模英语试题

　九、书面表达 66.假设你是 Susan，在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求，你是否有时感到厌烦？你是怎样解决的？请你根据下列要点提示用英语写一篇短文。

　（1）父母要求你每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上 10点前必须睡觉 （2）你觉得父母虽太严厉，但理解他们。

　（3）你决定与父母多交流，为父母做些家务。

　（4）你认为……。

　My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family.____________________________________________________

　【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents. 【解析】

　【详解】本文属于材料作文，针对父母对你要求过多你感到厌烦这一问题，你是如何解决的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

　亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, communicate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with 以及 get on well with。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

　【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

　认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

　构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出

　的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

　初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

　修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。