2020-2021学年高一英语外研版（2019）选择性必修第一册Unit2OnwardsandupwardsSectionⅥWriting导学讲义

Section Ⅵ　Writing 在黑暗中用餐 最近我在“黑暗餐厅”吃饭,在那里人们在完全黑暗的环境下吃饭,由盲人服务员服务。我想了解失明的经历,我认为吃东西是最困难的活动。

吃这顿饭很难。由于我们看不见东西在哪里,我和朋友打翻了杯子,弄掉了食物。我的味觉和嗅觉变得更加敏感,我吃得慢多了,努力猜测我吃的食物是什么。倒水很困难,还有,我一直用我朋友的杯子喝水。

用叉子叉食物用时五分钟,以失败告终后,我决定用手。我俯下身,想吃米饭和蔬菜,但相反,却把手伸进了一碗热乎乎的浓汤里。“这道菜最好是用勺子,”服务员在我耳边说,他帮了我的忙,但为时已晚。即使用勺子,大部分汤到头来还是溅到了我的衬衫上。尽管没人能看到我,但我感到很尴尬。

服务员建议我们把盘子和碗举着,靠近面部。然而,尽管我更加意识到盲人所面临的挑战,我仍旧饿着离开了餐馆。

假定你是李华,曾经在一所聋哑学校做过助教,请根据以下要点用英文写一篇作文,讲一讲你的助教经历。

1.一位失去生活信心的失聪女孩Jean在你的帮助下重拾生活信心; 2.当时你遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍; 3.你是如何克服困难的并学到了什么。

注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  写作指导 描写一次经历属于以记人叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式的文体。在写作时,要交代清楚时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)和事件(what),然后再进一步叙述事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)。

1.写作时应注意的问题: (1)正确运用时态。最常用到的时态是一般过去时和过去进行时,但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。

(2)常用第一人称,从“参与者”的角度进行叙述。

(3)要重视句子的衔接,用好过渡词。

2.写作的一般步骤: (1)交代此次经历发生的时间、地点和相关人物; (2)推动情节发展; (3)介绍经历的结果或谈自己的感想。

审题谋篇 词汇储备 1.embarrassed adj.难堪的,尴尬的 2.delightful adj.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的 3.companionship n.友谊;友好交往 4.upset adj.心烦意乱的,烦恼的 5.nevertheless adv.然而,不过 词汇运用 1.总之,帮助Jean重拾生活信心是一次愉快的经历。

On the whole, helping Jean restore her confidence in life is a delightful experience.  2.我面对的最大的困难是沟通障碍。

The biggest difficulty I faced was the communication barriers.  3.此外,我尽一切努力与她建立友谊及互相的信任。

Furthermore, I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her.  句式升级 1.用it作形式主语改写句(1)。

On the whole, it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life.  2.将句(2)改为强调句。

It was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced.  串句成文
(使用meanwhile等恰当的衔接词) On the whole, it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life. In my memory, the first time we met, she was always upset, making me embarrassed. Meanwhile, it was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced. Nevertheless, I made it. First, I advised her to gather courage to confront the difficulties instead of escaping from them. Furthermore, I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her.  Fortunately, what I got from this experience is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that everyone should be confident about life. 
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Life is filled with challenges. As we get older we come to realize that those challenges are the very things that come with friendship. When we are faced with a challenge, we usually have two choices: we can try to beat it off(击退), or we can decide that the thing presenting the challenge isn＇t worth the trouble and stop doing it. Although there are certainly times when stopping is the right thing to do, in most cases all that is needed is commitment(投入) and communication. When we are committed to something, it means that no matter how painful or how uncomfortable something is, we will always choose to face it and work it through instead of running away from it. Communication is making space for discussion and talking about how you feel instead of just saying what the other person did wrong. If you can say to a friend “I got my feelings hurt.” instead of “You hurt my feelings.”, you are going to be able to solve the problem much faster. In dealing with many challenges that friendship will bring to you, try to see them for what they are: small hurdles(障碍) you need to jump or get over on your way through life. Nothing is so big that it is impossible to get over, and hurt is only to serve to make us stronger. It＇s all part of growing up, and it happens to everyone, and some day you will look back on all of this and say, “Hard as it was, it made me who I am today. And that is a good thing.” 写作指导 Step 1　通读全文,理清结构 主旨大意:文章共四段,论述如何面对挑战以及迎接挑战对我们自身成长的益处。基本可以确定 challenge、commitment、communication为关键词。

文章结构: 第一段:生活中充满挑战,挑战伴随着友谊而出现。

第二段:当我们面对挑战时,我们会做出两种选择:勇敢地战胜它或选择逃避。但更多的时候,我们需要的是投入与沟通。

第三段:投入工作,迎接挑战意味着面对问题并解决问题,而沟通意味着为讨论留出空间,避免指责他人。

第四段:战胜挑战会使我们更加成熟、强大,挑战帮助我们成长。

Step 2　删繁就简,提炼要点 第一段:Life is filled with challenges, and challenges are the very things that come with friendship. 第二段:In most cases all that is needed is commitment and communication when we are faced with a challenge.   第三段:We will always choose to face it and work it through instead of running away from it. Communication is making space for discussion and talking about how you feel instead of just saying what the other person did wrong.  第四段:It＇s all part of growing up, and it happens to everyone, and some day you will look back on all of this and say, “Hard as it was, it made me who I am today. And that is a good thing.”  Step 3　合并改写,润色升级 要点1:Life is full of challenges that come with friendship.(对原要点语义转换)  要点2:In most cases, when dealing with such a challenge, commitment and communication are what we need. (用状语从句的省略;用what引导名词性从句)  要点3:Commitment means facing it and working it through while communication means making space for discussion and avoiding blaming others.   (choose to face改为mean facing;saying what the other person did wrong改为blaming others) 要点4:Remember that challenges actually do us good for they are part of growing up, making who we are today. (用do sb. good)  Step 4　联句成篇,复查誊写 通读初稿内容并进行仔细检查,可以从以下几方面进行重点审查:①所写概要覆盖了原文的全部要点信息,且各要点的表达相对独立。②全文在语言上没有语法或用词的错误,文章结构紧凑且上下句连贯通顺。③标点符号运用准确,单词拼写没有错误。④词数符合要求,总词数在60左右(不少于40,不超过80)。最后,把检查无误的初稿誊写到答卷上,保持书写规范,字迹清晰。

Life is full of challenges that come with friendship.(要点1)In most cases, when dealing with such a challenge, commitment and communication are what we need. (要点2)Commitment means facing it and working it through while communication means making space for discussion and avoiding blaming others. (要点3)Remember that challenges actually do us good for they are part of growing up, making who we are today. (要点4)