2021新高考英语重难热点专练07书面表达热点话题类（一）教师版

　2021 新高考书面表达热点预测一 真题再现 1.【2020·浙江卷】

　假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教 Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。

　注意:1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文 【参考范文 1 】Dear Peter, I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now? I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.

　We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文 2】

　Dear Peter, Hearing the news that you’re ill and you have returned to Ireland, I feel very sorry. I’m wondering whether you have recovered from your sickness. Therefore, I am writing to you to show my concern for your health. Through your tireless work, all of us have achieved much progress in English study, especially in speaking. What’s more, with the approaching of Gaokao, we are making full preparations for it. I believe in the near future, you will get our good news and we will live up to you expectations. We do sincerely hope that you will gain health soon and we are also expecting your early return to China.

　Yours, Li Hua 【解析】

　本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。

　第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。

　结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。

　要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?）

　2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）

　3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）

　第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

　be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery 第三步：连词成句 1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. 2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. 3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. 4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

　第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】

　范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

　1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：

　I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了 that 引导宾语从句。

　Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了 which引导限制性定语从句。

　As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中 as soon as 引导时间状语从句。

　2.使用了一些固定词组，如 be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause 等。

　全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句

　转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

　2.【2018·浙江】

　写作 应用文写作 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

　（1）. 口语能力：

　（2）. 相关经验； （3）. 应聘目的。

　注意：

　（1）. 词数 80 左右； （2）. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　【参考范文】

　Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Hearing that some volunteers are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job. I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends. I do believe the volunteer work will enable me to practise English more fluently and broaden my horizons. Looking forward to your early reply!95 Yours, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。

　第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：

　1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。

　第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for the post of…，experience of，communicate with，qualified for this position 等。

　第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。

　第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

　3. [2017·浙江卷 6 月考] 第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分) 假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友 Chris 写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：

　1. 参加者； 2. 时间、地点； 3. 活动：登山、野餐等。

　注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】

　Dear Chris,

　How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate.

　About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain. Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don"t have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It"s just up to you.

　Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua 【解析】

　本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。

　《热点预测》

　 预测一

　假定你是李华，受母亲影响，喜欢中国传统手工艺刺绣。最近，得知你的英国朋友 Lisa 正在苏州学习刺绣。请你给她写封邮件， 内容包括：

　1. 询问学习情况； 2. 分享你的作品； 3. 希望保持交流。

　注意：

　1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　注 注: 刺绣 embroidery 【答案】Dear Lisa, It is nice to know you are learning how to do embroidery in Suzhou, for I am also a big fan of this traditional Chinese handicraft. I wonder how you are getting along with your embroider courses. My mother is credited with arousing my interest in Chinese silk embroidery. Under her guidance, I have just finished one piece of needlework and I’d like to share it with you. If convenient, we can continue learning from each other by sharing our works and communicating regularly. Hope you can make more progress. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】

　本文为应用文。假定你是李华，受母亲影响，喜欢中国传统手工艺刺绣。最近，得知你的英国朋友 Lisa正在苏州学习刺绣。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：询问学习情况；分享你的作品；希望保持交流。

　本文为书信体作文。书信体作文分为三个部分，第一部分叙述写邮件的原因，你受母亲影响，喜欢中国传统手工艺刺绣。最近，得知你的英国朋友 Lisa正在苏州学习刺绣。给她写封邮件。第二部分叙述邮件的内容，包括：询问学习情况；分享你的作品；希望保持交流。最后表达自己的期待。注意词数 80 左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。同时运用一些顺序连词让整个文章更顺畅，句式也要灵活多变，如运用一些复合句如定语从句，状语从句等。

　【点睛】

　文章内容要点完整，结构合理。句式比较灵活，既有简单句与复杂句结合，如复杂句 It is nice to know you are learning how to do embroidery in Suzhou, for I am also a big fan of this traditional Chinese handicraft. I wonder how

　you are getting along with your embroider courses。还有并列句如 Under her guidance, I have just finished one piece of needlework and I’d like to share it with you；省略句如 If convenient, we can continue learning from each other by sharing our works and communicating regularly；以及宾语从句如 Hope you can make more progress。

　预测二

　【2020 届山东省聊城市高三二模】

　假定你是校报的编辑李华，本报计划在毕业季开展以“Highlights of My Senior Year” 为主题的征文比赛。请你用英语为此事写一则通知，刊登在校报上。内容包括：

　1. 活动目的； 2. 参赛作品的内容及要求； 3. 作品提交的时间及方式。

　注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　Notice ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The School Newspaper 【答案】Notice To enrich your campus life,the school newspaper plans to hold an essay competition themed Highlights of My Senior Year.The entry essays are expected to focus on the most impressive part of your senior year with the length of 100-200 words.If you are interested,please mail your essay to schoolnewspaper@163.com.You can also hand it in to our editorial office,Room 501 in the teaching building.Please bear in mind that the deadline for entries is June 15.It is a good opportunity to show your writing talent. Looking forward to your active participation. The School Newspaper 【解析】

　本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。

　本文是一篇通知。作为应用文的一种，它在格式、语言及习惯上有其与众不同的特点，只有掌握了这些特点，才能写出规范化的通知。假设你是李华，本报计划在毕业季开展以“Highlights of My Senior Year”为主题的征文比赛。要求用英语为此事写一则通知，刊登在校报上。内容包括：1. 活动目的；2.参赛作品的内容及要求；3.作品提交的时间及方式。要注意通知语言的简洁明了，内容清晰无误，时态语态准确。

　【点睛】

　本文是一篇通知。重点突出，结构合理，文中使用了高级句子: 1. To enrich your campus life,the school newspaper plans to hold an essay competition themed Highlights of My Senior Year.使用非谓语动词作后置定语；2. Please bear in mind that the deadline for entries is June 15.使用宾语从句。3. The entry essays are expected to focus on the most impressive part of your senior year with the length of 100-200 words. 使用了一般现在时态的被动语态。另外本文内容清晰简洁，语言运用恰当巧妙。

　预测三

　【2020 届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟】

　假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 听说中医药在新型冠状病毒疫情中凸显了医疗效能, 对中医药非常感兴趣，请给他回一封电子邮件，为他介绍一下中医药的相关信息. 要点包括: 1. 历史及地位；2. 在疫情中的作用；3. 发展前景；4. 其它。

　提示词：中医药 Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) 新型冠状病毒(novel coronavirus) 疫情(epidemic) 注意：1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 电子邮件的开头已为你写好° Dear Tom, How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom,

　How is everything going? Hearing that you are interested in Traditional Chinese Medicine, I am writing to give you a detailed description of it. Here is some relevant information. Traditional Chinese Medicine has a history of thousands of years, which can date back to remote antiquity. It is an indispensable part of Chinese culture and it has made great contributions to the prosperity of China. What is worth mentioning is that Traditional Chinese Medicine has played an important role in the treatment of novel coronavirus. The reason is that Traditional Chinese Medicine can build up people’s body and have no side effects, which is gained recognition around the world. I certainly believe if it is put to good use, it will benefit mankind. If you have anything you want to know, please feel free to ask me.

　 Yours， Li Hua 【解析】

　这是一篇应用文。你的英国笔友 Tom听说中医药在新型冠状病毒疫情中凸显了医疗效能,对中医药非常感兴趣，请给他回一封电子邮件，为他介绍一下中医药的相关信息。

　写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括: 1.历史及地位；2.在疫情中的作用；3.发展前景；4.其它。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题対于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的开篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

　【点睛】

　本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如: Hearing that you are interested in Traditional Chinese Medicine, I am writing to give you a detailed description of it 运用非谓语动词；Traditional Chinese Medicine has a history of thousands of years, which can date back to remote antiquity.运用了非限制定语从句；What is worth mentioning is that Traditional Chinese Medicine has played an important role in the treatment of novel coronavirus.运用了主语从句和表语从句。

　预测四

　【2020 届山东省枣庄市高三模拟考试（二调)】

　假定你是李华。你的外籍教师 John 本打算春季开学时返回中国，现因新冠（COVID －19 ）疫情待在 London 家中。你 在英语学习中遇到了一些困难，请给他写一封email 寻求帮助。内容如下：

　1. 询问 John 的健康情况； 2. 告知学习中的困难； 3. 请求帮助。

　注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear John,

　How are you doing recently? I"m sorry to hear that you have to stay home in London because of the outbreak of COVID－19. I think you will take good care of your health in this emergency period, as you are a cautious person and will respond to the call for epidemic prevention. Although the epidemic situation in our country has been under control, we are still having online lessons at home. Unfortunately, I"m having some trouble with my English study. What has been bothering me recently is that I have difficulty in making sentences with new words. I hope you can give me some useful advice, as you are very experienced in dealing with such problems.

　 Looking forward to your early reply.

　 Yours, Li Hua 【解析】

　本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

　第 1 步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华。你的外籍教师 John 本打算春季开学时返回中国，现因新冠（COVID－19）疫情待在 London 家中。你在英语学习中遇到了一些困难，请给他写一封 email 寻求帮助,内容如下：1.询问 John 的健康情况；2.告知学习中的困难；3.请求帮助。时态应为一般现在时。

　第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：outbreak(爆发)，emergency period(非常时期)，epidemic

　prevention(防疫)，useful(有用的)，experienced(有经验的)及 cautious(谨慎的)等。

　第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

　第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

　【点睛】

　范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有 because of(由于)，take good care of(好好照顾)，having trouble with (在某方面有麻烦)，have difficulty in doing(做某事有困难)，respond to(响应)以及 deal with(处理)，而且还使用了宾语从句 I"m sorry to hear that you have to stay home in London because of the outbreak of COVID－19.主语从句 What has been bothering me recently is that I have difficulty in making sentences with new words. 状语从句 I think you will take good care of your health in this emergency period, as you are a cautious person and will respond to the call for epidemic prevention. Although the epidemic situation in our country has been under control, we are still having online lessons at home.及 I hope you can give me some useful advice, as you are very experienced in dealing with such problems.全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

　预测五

　【河北省保定市 2020-2021 学年上学期高三摸底考试】你校学生会将举办一次以中医药（traditional Chinese medicine)为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一个书面通知。内容包括：

　1.比赛目的； 2.比赛时间及地点：11月 4 日下午 3 点，报告厅； 3.报名时间及地点：10 月 26-30 日，学生会办公室。

　注意：

　1.词数 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　Notice ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Student Union 【答案】Notice

　In order to improve students’ spoken English and inspire their interest in learning traditional Chinese medicine, we are going to hold an English speech contest on traditional Chinese medicine in the lecture hall at 3：00 p.m. on November 4, 2020. Those who have an interest in it can sign up at the office of Student Union from October 26 through October 30. Please try your best and be well-prepared. You are supposed to get there on time. All the students are welcome. Student Union 【解析】

　本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一个书面通知，表达学生会将举办一次以中医药为主题的英语演讲比赛的相关情况。

　第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

　要求：1.比赛目的； 2.比赛时间及地点：11月 4 日下午 3 点，报告厅； 3.报名时间及地点：10 月 26-30 日，学生会办公室。

　第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

　improve students’ spoken English； inspire their interest in ； traditional Chinese medicine； hold an English speech contest； in the lecture hall ； sign up for ； at the office of Student Union;

　be well-prepared; are supposed to 。

　第三步：连词成句 1. In order to improve students’ spoken English. 2.Inspire their interest in learning traditional Chinese medicine.

　3.we are going to hold an English speech contest on traditional Chinese medicine in the lecture hall at 3：00 p.m. on November 4, 2020.

　4.If you have an interest in it , you can sign up at the office of Student Union from October 26 through October 30.

　5.Please try your best and be well-prepared.

　6.You are supposed to get there on time.

　7.All the students are welcome. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

　第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

　通知简短，语言简洁。本文没有使用表文章结构顺序 Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…或 表并列补充关系Besides, Moreover 等衔接词。第一句巧妙使用介词短语 in order to 说明通知的目的；第二句使用了 Those who … 的定语从句，说明了想参赛的对象。

　【点睛】

　范文内容完整，通知把比赛目的、比赛时间及地点、报名时间及地点等要点清析表达，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一个主从复合句：Those who have an interest in it can sign up at the office of Student Union from October 26 through October 30。这句话运用了 who引导的定语从句。使用了固定词组 inspire their interest in ; be supposed to do 等。文章思路清晰，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

　预测六

　【湖北省七校联盟 2021 届高三上学期期中联考】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Henry写邮件请你推荐一个可以游览中国风景名胜的虚拟旅游（virtual travel）网站。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

　1. 介绍所推荐网站（包括网址、网站特点、如何使用等）； 2. 推荐旅游景点。

　注意：1.写作词数应为 80左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出； 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　Dear Henry, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Henry, How is everything going? Knowing that you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a

　virtual travel website, I highly recommend www.virtualtravel.com. The website offers 3D virtual tours of many amazing sights in China. You can register on the website or download the app. In addition, if you want to take photos in a place you are interested in, just click the mouse. Many popular sights, such as West Lake, Mount Tai and the Palace Museum, won’t fail to feast your eyes. I wish you would have a wonderful time. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】

　本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

　第 1 步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Henry写邮件请你推荐一个可以游览中国风景名胜的虚拟旅游（virtual travel）网站。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍所推荐网站（包括网址、网站特点、如何使用等）；2. 推荐旅游景点。

　第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be extremely enthusiastic about (对……充满热情)；virtual travel website(虚拟旅游网站)；highly recommend(强烈推荐)；amazing(令人惊异的)；sights(风景)；register(注册)；download(下载)；in addition(另外)；take photos(拍照)；such as(比如)等。

　第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

　第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

　【点睛】

　范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Knowing that you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a virtual travel website, I highly recommend www.virtualtravel.com.运用宾语从句；In addition, if you want to take photos in a place you are interested in, just click the mouse.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

　预测七

　【河北省石家庄市 2021 届高中毕业班教学质量检测（一）】你们年级计划举办一场英文演讲比赛，主题为“我最喜爱的运动”。请写一篇参赛演讲稿。

　内容包括：

　1. 运动项目； 2. 喜爱原因。

　注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。

　My Favorite Sport Hello, everyone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My Favorite Sport Hello，everyone. My favorite sport is swimming and here are my reasons. First, it"s an affordable sport. Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn"t pricey though. Second, swimming is beneficial to your heart and lungs. In addition to its physical benefits, swimming is also an effective way to relax. Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime. In conclusion, as a very good workout, swimming can give you peace of mind to continue with your day.85 【解析】

　这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。

　你们年级计划举办一场英文演讲比赛，主题为“我最喜爱的运动”。请写一篇参赛演讲稿。

　内容包括：1. 运动项目；2. 喜爱原因。通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

　【点睛】

　这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn"t pricey though.让步状语从句的运用；Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime. 动名词作主语。

　预测 八

　【湖南省五市十校教研教改共同体 2021 届高三 10 月大联考】12 月 3 日是世界助残日（the World Disability Day),请你以学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议信，内容包括：

　1.倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？ 2.活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。

　3.今后的打算。

　注意：

　1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

　Dear Classmates, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students English Club 【答案】Dear classmates, December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner. To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students Union will organize an activity with the theme “What can we do for the disabled”. Anyone who volunteers is welcome. On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes. To make this kind of activity a rule, every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them. The Students English Club 【解析】

　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议信。

　第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时和一般将来时 结构：总分法 要求：

　1.倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？ 2.活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。

　3.今后的打算。

　第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

　the World Disability Day；around the corner；concern；disabled；organize；volunteer；cleaning the house；washing clothes； 第三步：连词成句 1. December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner. 2. We Students Union will organize an activity with the theme “What can we do for the disabled” 3. Anyone who volunteers is welcome. 4. On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.

　5. Every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them. 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

　1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), On the one hand… 4.表因果关系：Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰 第五步：润色修改。

　【点睛】

　范文内容符合题目要求，格式正确，运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范并且运用了高级句式如：Anyone who volunteers is welcome.这句话使用 who 引导定语从句；Every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.这句话使用 what 引导宾语从句；此外还使用了较多的高级词汇：around the corner；concern；disabled；organize；volunteer 等。

　预测九

　【辽宁省六校协作体 2021 届高三第一次联考】你是某中学健康专栏“HEART-TO-HEART”的编辑 Li Hua，近日你收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

　内容要点如下：

　1．表示理解并给予安慰；

　2．提出建议并说明理由。

　注意：

　1．词数 80左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

　参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Dear Worried， I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

　Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Hi Worried， I’m sorry to learn that you’re having such a bad time. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods, so you don’t have to worry. Here are two useful tips about how to control your temper. First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out. What’s more, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise will be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you’ll have a good mood. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】

　这是一篇应用文。文章主要是写一封回信，回应一位同学的求助。

　第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

　结构：总分法

　 总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

　要求：

　1.表示理解并给予安慰 2.提出建议并说明理由 第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

　control one’s temper；a good way of doing sth.；let one’s anger out；what’s more；go outdoors；play team games with your friends；physical exercise；lift one’s spirits；have a good mood；looking forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m sorry to learn that you’re having such a bad time. 2. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods, so you don’t have to worry. 3. Here are two useful tips about how to control your temper. 4. Talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out. 5. Go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise will be helpful in lifting your spirits. 6. I hope you’ll have a good mood. 7. Looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。

　第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

　1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】

　范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out.中 which 引导非限制性定语从句，也使用了非谓语动词，如：Besides,doing the square dance is a good way for people to keep fit.中 doing 为动名词作主语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

　预测十

　湖南省长沙市雅礼中学 2021 届高三月考】假如你是李明，刚刚高中毕业，你的美国好友 Jim 给你写信祝贺并想了解你大学的专业学习计划。请你根据自己的情况用英语写封回信，主要内容包括：

　1. 你的专业选择； 2. 你选择该专业的理由； 3. 为此你打算怎么做。

　注意：

　1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实个人信息； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 4. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 5. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

　Dear Jim, Thanks for your best wishes! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours,

　Li Ming 【答案】Dear Jim,

　Thanks for your best wishes!

　I’m writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university. I have decided to major in computer science.

　There are some reasons why I made such a decision. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I can study computer science better. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.

　I know there is a long way to go. So now I must devote myself to study and try my best to get good grades in all subjects. If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software.

　 Best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply.

　Yours,

　Li Ming 【解析】

　本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，向朋友讲述自己大学的专业学习计划。

　第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

　结构：四段式结构。第一段表示感谢（已给出）；第二段讲述大学专业学习和理由；第三段讲述为此打算如何做；第四段寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出）。

　要求：1.表达感谢（已给出）

　 2.讲述大学专业选择及理由

　 1）专业选择：计算机科学专业（major in computer science）

　 2）理由（play an important role; one of my hobbies; find a good job）

　 3.打算如何做。（focus on; study hard）

　 4.寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出）

　第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

　decide to do; major in; play an important role; graduate from college; devote oneself to; try one’s best to; focus on

　第三步：连词成句 1. I have decided to major in computer science. 2. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.

　3. Last but not least, being good at comp...