2021届高考英语重难热点专练12,书面表达之多样表达（原卷版）

　2021 年高考英语【热点·重点·难点】专练（浙江专用）

　难点 点 12 书面表达之多样表达 【思维路径】

　1. 思维路径 1：

　：

　句子形式多样化 根据表达的需求, 可以采用多种句式, 这样既能恰当表达, 又能避免形式单一。

　[ 经典示例] ①They were so heavy that we couldn’t lift them at first.

　(so. . . that. . . 句型) ②There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.

　(同位语从句) [ 佳句赏析] ① In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more colorful.

　→In recent years, with more and more people starting to protect our environment, our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (with 复合结构)

　→Nowadays, there are so many people who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (there be 句式)

　②If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.

　→Study hard and you will make rapid progress. (并列句)

　2. 思维路径 2：

　：

　非谓语动 使 句子凝练高端 [ 经典示例] ①After learning it,

　I’ m sure I’ll have a better understanding of the differences and similarities between Chinese culture and Western culture.

　②On arriving at the tea house,

　the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词) →She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.

　 ②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词) →They went back to school, singing and laughing.

　 3. 思维路径 3：

　：

　定语从句增加细节 [ 经典示例]

　①Material collecting took us a whole week,

　during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.

　②I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event,

　in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance with more friends with the same interest.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课).

　 ②Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).

　 ③I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.

　 4. 思维路径 4：

　：

　倒装增强句子表现力 [ 经典示例] ①Not only will our club’s works be displayed,

　but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field.

　②Not only did you help improve my English,

　but you also gave me more confidence in learning.

　 ③Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装) →Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.

　 ②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装) →No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.

　 5. 思维路径 5：

　：

　强调句增强说服力 [ 经典示例] ①It is you who taught me how to learn English well.

　② It was on Friday that our activity began.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句) →It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.

　 ②It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.

　6. 思维路径 6：

　：

　名词性从句 让句子 精彩纷呈 [ 经典示例] ①If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.

　②That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句) →What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.

　 ②I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).

　 7. 思维路径 7 ：with or without 精彩点缀: [ 经典示例] ①Moreover, with the stadium set up,

　a wide range of sports events are able to be held,

　of which ping-pong,

　football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.

　②Without any hesitation,

　we began to work.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim (没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass.

　 ②I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldn’t have made such great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).

　 8. 思维路径 8：

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　副词充分表情达意 [ 经典示例] ①I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.

　②I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①She patiently(仔细地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.

　②We were perfectly(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.

　9. 思维路径 9：

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　委婉语气中肯 而 易于接受 [ 经典示例] ①If you have further questions,

　please feel free to let me know.

　②I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.

　[ 佳句赏析] ①I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework.

　 ②What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, please tell me as quickly as possible(请尽快告诉我).

　 【语篇锤炼】

　 根据所给信息补全短文, 并注意高级句式的应用。

　假定你是李华, 你校的交换生 Tom 对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣, 本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”, 请你写一封电子邮件, 邀请 Tom 去体验编织艺术。

　Dear Tom,

　（1）

　(来好消息了).

　The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday. Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, it’s a great pleasure for me to invite you to join us.

　 The activity is scheduled to last approximately two hours, from 3:30 pm to 5:30 pm in the school hall. It covers a wide variety of content.（2）

　(我们不仅能够看到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品, 从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足), but also we’ll watch the documentary （3）

　(有关的) the history of the weaving art.

　 In addition,（4）

　(一些著名教授)will be invited to deliver a lecture about（5）

　 (如何促进编织艺术的发展), （6）

　 (在这期间你定会对它有更好的了解). By the way, if you are available, we’ll meet at three outside the school gate.

　 （7）

　 (我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)!

　Your timely reply will be highly appreciated.

　 Yours,

　Li Hua 答案：

　（1）Here comes a piece of good news （2）

　Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to various decorations （3）Concerning

　（4）

　some distinguished professors （5）

　how to promote the development of the weaving art （6）during which time you will definitely gain a better understanding of it （7）How I hope you can take my invitation into consideration 【 写作实践】

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　1. 假如你是李华，你们学校的外教 Mr. James 想找一个人教他 8 岁的儿子中文。请你写信推荐你的朋友王明，并说明推荐理由。注意：词数 80 左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　参考词汇：推荐 recommend

　vt. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

　Yollie was slender as a tulip, pretty, and one of the smartest girls at Saint Theresa"s. She was an honor student, and a winner in the school"s monthly spelling bees. She lived with her mother, Mrs. Moreno. Recently one thing bothered Yollie a lot. She needed a new dress for the twelfth-grade fall dance. But her mother couldn"t afford one. "We don"t have the money," said her mother, genuinely sad. The best Mrs. Moreno could do was buy Yollie a pair of black shoes with velvet bows and dyed color to her white summer dress black. "We can dye your dress so it will look brand-new," her mother said brightly, shaking the bottle of dye as she ran hot water into a plastic container. She poured in the black liquid and stirred it. Then, slowly and carefully, she lowered the dress. Yollie couldn"t stand to watch. She doubted whether it would work. But to her surprise, the dress came out shiny black. Mrs. Moreno beamed at her and said, "See, what did I tell you?" Yollie hugged her mother in relief. At least she had a new dress for the ball which was important to girls at her age. Yollie bathed, dressed, and did her makeup carefully until her mother yelled, "All right already?" Yollie bounced out of Mrs. Moreno"s car in front of the school and ran into her best friend, Janice. They didn"t say it, but each thought the other was the most beautiful and charming girl at the dance; the boys would fall over themselves asking them to dance. Everyone danced, sipped punch, and stood in knots of threes and fours, talking. The evening was warm but thick with clouds. Gusts of wind picked up the paper lanterns hanging in the

　trees and swung them, blurring the night with reds and yellows. The lanterns made the evening seem romantic, like a scene from a movie. 注意：

　1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

　Paragraph 1: As the boys and girls circled under the lanterns, rain began falling, lightly at first, then poured. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Yollie hurried from the restroom, heading home directly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。

　Eighty-five percent of the jobs that today"s students will do in 2030 don"t exist yet,the Institute for the Future has predicted.That might seem like a high number to reach in only 10 years.But think about the non-mainstream careers that did not exist just a handful of years ago: social media manager,app developer and cloud computing engineer,etc.What role should colleges and universities play in preparing students for a workplace that is constantly changing? Educational institutions are trying to answer that question."We hope they will not only be prepared for whatever the job market looks like in 10,20 or 50 years but be the ones shaping it," said Jenn Stringer,professor at the University of Californian,Berkeley.Here are some of the approaches they"re taking. Some experts argue that the four-year learning model needs to be rethought in a big way. They say education can no longer be seen as something that stops when a person graduates from college.If students could take a year or two off school,get a job,and then return to school a few years later,the education system would offer true life-long learning and better adapt to changing technology. Fewer employers are willing to train people on the job than the employers 50 years ago, largely as part of an

　effort to cut costs.To fill the job skills gap,some courses are offered as an add-on to a student"s main degree.For example,the courses may include data analysis,web design and digital marketing.The goal is to offer students,a degree aside,some advantages when they seek jobs or promotions in the future.

　Other institutions are trying to imitate the workplace within the traditional classroom. Several colleges have partnered with private companies,such as the software company Adobe, to integrate their products into the classroom.Professors at schools who partner with the company are encouraged to use the product for assignments.The idea is that students learn how to create a project that can be used in the real world and the"soft skills"such as teamwork and creativity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________